Explanation Writing ll What would I change in School?

During this week my classroom has been working on explanation writing. I have re-confirmed my understanding of the structure of explanation writing.

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What I would change in school?

Grandparents poem

Grandparents poem

My Grandma is special to me.

She always respects other like they respect her.

She is always dressed like an angel.

My Grandma never gives up on me.


She says to don’t do the bad things and always choose the right things.


She is always proud of me when I do something good for her.


She has always made me and my sister laugh when she tells stories.

Fathers Day Card

This is my Fathers Day Card for my Dad last Sunday

Dear Dad,

I want to tell you that you are the most precious dad that I have in my life. You always pushed me to aim higher to achieve my goals. I remember how we all used to go to the beach for a swim. You told me to always do my best in all the things that I do.

I remember when you said to don't worry about the kids that distract me and when you said that learning matters the most in school, those words meant a lot to me.

If there is anything you need I'll be there to give it to you and of you need help I'll help you do anything. I will be the one that will be there for you to give you help or give something to you. I hope you enjoy you Happy Fathers Day.

HAPPY FATHERS DAY!!

My Joyful Holiday

My Joyful Holiday

In the holidays I went to a family fun day at the netball center. We went to have some fun. I went to spend some time with my family. It was the best thing because everything was for free. I felt like going everyday.

At the family fun day there was candy floss, popcorn and other yummy stuff. I had a sausage roll to eat first because I saw some onions and tomato sauce.

I played on the bouncy castle with my brothers and cousin. She was pushing me around so I could fall. I fell and nearly hit my head on the ground but then my brother jumped out of the bouncy castle and lifted me up in case I hit my head and cry.

I spent a little time with my family. We had a lot of fun and a lot of popcorn. My family had a Tongan flag on their right cheek that was painted. My dad came and played master with me and my cousins. Me and my dad won.

I had a great day, my favorite thing at the family fun day was eating candy floss and going on the car train with a whole lot of children.

I kept waving at my dad. My aunt kept throwing the ball at me because we were playing master and I could get the ball in the hoop all the time.

It was time for the fun day to finish. At the end there was questions for the children. I had to go and answer some questions so I could get a prize. I got a prize but it was only a bottle. My favorite thing was eating the sausage sizzle with onions and tomato sauce.

I had a great day with my cousins at the family fun day. I kept my Tongan flag on my cheek. I kept eating sausage sizzles when I went home. My mum kept telling me not to eat too much because she said I might get fat.

The rest of the holidays I had to clean the house because no one would clean it. My dad said if I clean the house I can go to the pool’s.

So I cleaned the house and then I told my dad can I go to the pool’s. But then he said he’s tired, so I just stayed home and watched t.v and played games on the computer.

My brother said to me if I want to go with him to McDonald's and I said yes straight away. So we went to the McDonald's and then went to my grandma's house and did her gardening.

On the last day of the holidays I went to the pool’s with my family, It was called swimarama, it was the best day ever because we had takeaways to eat. I was going to go back in the pool’s but I had to swim in the pool’s outside.

I had to go home because my lips were getting purple and it meant I was getting cold so I went home and slept.